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FullmetalMustang

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2013 Beta testing Essay
« on: August 28, 2012, 08:30:53 PM »

This is the first draft of the Essay established 8/28
We need the final draft next Friday.
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mbyers

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Re: 2013 Beta testing Essay
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 07:31:19 AM »

Overall, it looks good to me. I did find one typo, but I will leave that up to you students to find :-)
I noticed information mentioned in opening paragraph is repeated again within the essay. Seemed odd to me, but I'm not the best with English, so that is probably the proper way to write an essay  :)
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Re: 2013 Beta testing Essay
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 10:06:36 PM »

Final version given to me by Tommy, which I used to submit the app.

Nice job guys!
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Re: 2013 Beta testing Essay
« Reply #3 on: September 07, 2012, 06:57:09 AM »

very nice
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